Lives lost- He stands up to show where the girls "perfected" their jump shots, practiced their cheering, and singing. He used the rule of threes.
Open
He uses them to illustrate the story better and make the reader more interested.
When the narrator said that the one guy was the architect of the Pearl Harbor memorial.
Friday, March 5, 2010
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
3/3/10
The interviewer would ask questions to the kids and then not respond when they answered so they'd elaborate more.
Monday, February 22, 2010
Commercial Critques
Leah- All fun no work
yes she used it well.
Good, lots of different movement.
Skills were used well.
30 seconds
Nate- Imma be
Very well.
Good, nice transitions.
I really enjoyed the music.
30 seconds
Dylan-I'm me
Good.
Very well, cool pictures.
I liked the LIl' Wayne picture.
30 seconds
Will Biernat- Simply Will
Very nicely.
Good.
I enjoyed the music.
30 seconds
yes she used it well.
Good, lots of different movement.
Skills were used well.
30 seconds
Nate- Imma be
Very well.
Good, nice transitions.
I really enjoyed the music.
30 seconds
Dylan-I'm me
Good.
Very well, cool pictures.
I liked the LIl' Wayne picture.
30 seconds
Will Biernat- Simply Will
Very nicely.
Good.
I enjoyed the music.
30 seconds
Friday, February 19, 2010
Tiger Woods
As a fan- I feel like his apology was a long time in the making. I still respect him as a person and an athlete, but his apology took too long.
As a journalist- His apology was not convincing, he isnt a very good public speaker and you could really tell that he was just reciting a speech he had previously written. It didn't seem very real.
As a journalist- His apology was not convincing, he isnt a very good public speaker and you could really tell that he was just reciting a speech he had previously written. It didn't seem very real.
Thursday, February 18, 2010
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
Monday, February 8, 2010
Super Bowl Commercial
Commercial 1- Gatorade- "The Journey"
Target Audience- Athletes
Action
Slogan- 12
Message- Determination very effective.
Commercial 2- Doritos- "Ninja"
Target audience- everyone
Action, Humor
Message- Eat your own Doritos
No slogan, yet effective.
Commercial 3- Bud light "Auto Tone"
Target Audience- Over 21
Humor
Slogan- Make the party right.
Message- Bud light is good. very effective
Commercial 4-Doritos- "House Rules"
Target Audience- Everyone
Humor
Message- protect your doritos, Very effective, very funny.
Slogan- Keep your hands off my mama, keep your hands off my Doritos.
Commercial 5- Etrade- "Girlfriend"
Target Audience- Adults
Humor
Slogan- Milkaholic
Message- Use Etrade, not very effective to me, I don't shop for insurance.
Target Audience- Athletes
Action
Slogan- 12
Message- Determination very effective.
Commercial 2- Doritos- "Ninja"
Target audience- everyone
Action, Humor
Message- Eat your own Doritos
No slogan, yet effective.
Commercial 3- Bud light "Auto Tone"
Target Audience- Over 21
Humor
Slogan- Make the party right.
Message- Bud light is good. very effective
Commercial 4-Doritos- "House Rules"
Target Audience- Everyone
Humor
Message- protect your doritos, Very effective, very funny.
Slogan- Keep your hands off my mama, keep your hands off my Doritos.
Commercial 5- Etrade- "Girlfriend"
Target Audience- Adults
Humor
Slogan- Milkaholic
Message- Use Etrade, not very effective to me, I don't shop for insurance.
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